...please.... don't forgive me... forget me... i know who i was... and could not stop my transformation... the darkness... the night... the temptations...the sin... it was all my home... my life... every night swept into the day with such sweet violence... i did not know who i was becoming... and i left you... alone... in misery... i was supposed to be your savior... your new light... a reason to believe in love... ... but i failed you... i am no different... i guess... i knew who i was... and i hated it... forget me... please... let me live with the torture of knowing that i am nothing but a ghost of a memory to you now... i deserve that pain.. i wish it... i do not know why i desire this painful suffering... i think it is my only cure... to live in this sickness forever... i know you had loved me once... and i love you still...

A very thought driven poem where the ideas flitting through the narrators head are simply given. It is cohesive and meaningful. Decent job